These six are from my new release:
James is about to face his father with the truth about his sexuality for the first time.
"You can do this. You can’t just disappear with no word. Man up and get it over with, no turning back." Jet pulled into the front yard and cut the engine. The silence in the cab was deafening. James felt he was setting out to walk the green mile, terrified of walking into his family home for the last time.
8 comments:
Powerful Six- could feel the emotions
Dawne P
Great Six! I love it! I cannot wait to read this. :)
Very nice dialogue between the two men. Women would say something very different. You captured the masculine thought process.
Great dialogue!
Great dialogue. It really sounded like two men having a hard discussion.
I like the dialogue too! And the emotion your words created.
Great dialogue, especially "man up." I can feel James's fear.
Here's my six: Sandy's Six
You really can sense his fear. good writing.
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