Sunday, May 29, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday!





These six are from my new release:



James is about to face his father with the truth about his sexuality for the first time.



"You can do this. You can’t just disappear with no word. Man up and get it over with, no turning back." Jet pulled into the front yard and cut the engine. The silence in the cab was deafening. James felt he was setting out to walk the green mile, terrified of walking into his family home for the last time.

8 comments:

An Open Book said...

Powerful Six- could feel the emotions
Dawne P

Rawiya said...

Great Six! I love it! I cannot wait to read this. :)

Randi Alexander said...

Very nice dialogue between the two men. Women would say something very different. You captured the masculine thought process.

Carolyn Rosewood said...

Great dialogue!

Rebecca Royce said...

Great dialogue. It really sounded like two men having a hard discussion.

Halli Gomez said...

I like the dialogue too! And the emotion your words created.

Sandy Ruth said...

Great dialogue, especially "man up." I can feel James's fear.
Here's my six: Sandy's Six

Jayel Kaye said...

You really can sense his fear. good writing.